Friday, April 29, 2011

Project 3

1 comment:

  1. Hi Joseph,

    I've made a series of edits to suggests some areas of improvement.

    Go to this LINK (click on the word "LINK" even if it doesn't look like a link).

    A quick run down:
    - extend the top of the illustration a bit
    - make the tail of the snake overlap the guy's cape
    - to make it clear that the snake is a shadow, paint in it some of the wall's color variations
    - dramatize the lighting a lot more
    - color your light and shadows
    - cast shadows
    - add some scaly patterns to the tail of the snake

    You're off to a good start, yet you've got lots of possibilities to improve this illustration.

    Go for it!


    P.S.: my repainted example at the other webpage is a quick retouch: use it as rough example, not as the "perfect" example.